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Tough Girls Need a Break Too

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My OC SOria again, this time simply taking a bath :) She needs to relax like the rest of us lol
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I actually think this is a beautiful pic. Lets do the pros. I love the detail in the hair, and the look on her face as if she's relaxing. The anatomy is pretty accurate.
The cons: I see the steam as if she's in the bath, but can you show contrast with her body to make the steam stand out? For example, you could make undertones (shading) of her skintone, or you can add undertones and even a shine to show she's wet with water/sweat, steam etc. Or, you can show more water surrounding her, just watch your lightsource. Hope this helps! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>