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November 5, 2012
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This isn't the final drawing.
I'm actually submitting this to get some feedback. I want to know if you guys and gals like the idea for the background.
-should I add more?
-should I do something entirely different?
-I have other ideas that I'm working on as well. I will submit them once I've finished drafting them :nod:

If you notice any adjustments that I need to make or maybe you have ideas for the design, I will take them into consideration. Any help is appreciated.

OR, if you just want to be nice and comment, I appreciate those as well lol :D
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Critique by *ChristaSea Nov 5, 2012, 4:42:43 PM
I really love how the person is going. The lines are smooth, and I especially love how you did the hair and the folds in the clothing. However, when it comes to the background, I think a little more work needs to be done. I don't mind the concept of a castle on a hill with a forest in the background, but I think much more detail needs to be put into the background. The trees and the road, especially, seem to be lacking in detail. The castle seems to be going fairly well, though it could use some touching up. I love how you did the rock in the foreground, and the sky is good. Also, the placement of the hills is well done. Overall, I think this is starting to be really good, but could use some work in the areas I pointed out.
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